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I actually want to vomit I'm in so much pain. And there's Simon staring slack jawed at Deevya in her Wonderbra and sequined leopard skin leggings, while the remains of her torn top dangle from the catch in the window. 

Nomusa stands on her tiptoes, grabs the pieces of ripped fabric and hands them to Deevya, who slips them on, twisting the frayed pieces around her bra straps until it looks pretty decent. In fact it looks fantastic. While she's quietly closing the window I'm wondering if Deevya has a future in fashion rather than animation.  

"Lets get out of here fast!" she says.  

"No can do," I gasp in pain. "My ankle ..."

And we all peer down at what now looks remarkably similar to an elephant's foot jammed into my highheel.

"Oh my goodness," says Nomusa. "We need to get that shoe off!" 

She bends down to undo the strap.

And then my phone rings, and it's my mother of course.

"Answer as if everything's totally normal," Deevya instructs.

Ok, in fact if Deevya doesn't go into animation or fashion after school she may well have a future as a con artist.

"Hi mom."

"Hi darling. Are you having fun?"

"Yes mom! I'm having an amazing time!" I exclaim as Nomusa shoots me an apologetic look as she resorts to cutting through the strap of my high heel with the penknife on Simon's key ring. What I used to think of as my ankle continues to mutate into a large balloon.

"Darling, I'm afraid I'm going to have to come and fetch you early. I know its New Year's and I said you could stay out until after midnight, but I feel like I might be getting a migraine. I'm sorry but I'm going to have to come and pick you up in the next ten minutes so that I can drive us safely home, take my medicine and get into bed. Will you wait by the front door?"

"Sure mom," I hear my voice saying before my brain can catch up with it. "I'll see you in ten minutes."


Hope's in big trouble. What do you think she should do?


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  1. 4 Jan. 2011
    46. *..N@bEeLaH..* says

    You shouldnt lie 2 ur parents and do things behind their backs.. Deevya is a bad influence

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  2. 4 Jan. 2011
    45. AGNES says


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  3. 4 Jan. 2011
    44. Mbalentle says

    I so wish evry teenager out thr cud read ths st0ry... A less0n wll b learnt in th end. Nice st0ry maaan. Kudliwa ngokuthiwa accept n appreciate evry lil thng u get,nam ke i appreciate th 1 short chaptr i read evryday...kip em c0mmming....

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  4. 4 Jan. 2011
    43. Adorous says

    Yo yo yo thy in trouble 4 sure bt it such a nice story to follow cnt w8 4 da whole story of hw it wil ends and da more adventure cuming da way

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  5. 4 Jan. 2011
    42. René+Neethling says

    I cnt wait 4 da nxt chapter i dnt like readng much bt im likng ths story.

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  6. 4 Jan. 2011
    41. Try says

    Wages of sin .,.

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